First date jitters

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First date jitters

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01-04-2013, 11:59 AM

Hi Jae,

I hadn't gotten back to the edit. I like what you've done, especially the addition of hopes. I like it for content and alliteration.

The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson

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RE: The first date - by Todd - 12-28-2012, 02:20 PM

RE: First date jitters - by billy - 12-28-2012, 05:55 PM

RE: First date jitters - by Todd - 01-04-2013, 11:59 AM

RE: First date jitters - by billy - 01-04-2013, 04:40 PM

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