Old Guns. Edit 2. billy, todd et al

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Old Guns. Edit 2. billy, todd et al

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01-04-2013, 03:28 AM

(01-04-2013, 02:11 AM)Pete Ak Wrote: I feel stupid now completely missing the premise of your poem. In my defence, had the title bar been just 'Old Gun' I might have had a chance! I read it as a message to Billy re. an edit and dismissed it!
So to complete my critique, I can now say I consider it to be a fine poem.

A playful title........Young Guns Smile

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Old Guns. Edit 2. billy, todd et al - by tectak - 01-03-2013, 07:49 PM

RE: Old Guns. Edit 1. billy et al - by serge gurkski - 01-03-2013, 08:35 PM

RE: Old Guns. Edit 1. billy et al - by tectak - 01-03-2013, 09:52 PM

RE: Old Guns. Edit 1. billy et al - by serge gurkski - 01-03-2013, 10:12 PM

RE: Old Guns. Edit 1. billy et al - by Pete Ak - 01-03-2013, 10:32 PM

RE: Old Guns. Edit 1. billy et al - by tectak - 01-04-2013, 12:13 AM

RE: Old Guns. Edit 1. billy et al - by Pete Ak - 01-04-2013, 02:11 AM

RE: Old Guns. Edit 1. billy et al - by tectak - 01-04-2013, 03:28 AM

RE: Old Guns. Edit 1. billy et al - by Todd - 01-04-2013, 06:47 AM

RE: Old Guns. Edit 1. billy et al - by tectak - 01-04-2013, 07:44 AM

RE: Old Guns. Edit 2. billy, todd et al - by Todd - 01-04-2013, 07:50 AM

RE: Old Guns. Edit 2. billy, todd et al - by tectak - 01-04-2013, 08:20 AM

RE: Old Guns. Edit 2. billy, todd et al - by Todd - 01-04-2013, 09:50 AM

RE: Old Guns. Edit 2. billy, todd et al - by billy - 01-04-2013, 10:08 AM

RE: Old Guns. Edit 2. billy, todd et al - by Stalker - 01-07-2013, 06:02 AM

RE: Old Guns. Edit 2. billy, todd et al - by tectak - 01-07-2013, 06:20 AM

RE: Old Guns. Edit 2. billy, todd et al - by Stalker - 01-07-2013, 07:04 AM

RE: Old Guns. Edit 2. billy, todd et al - by tectak - 01-07-2013, 08:07 AM

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