Old Guns. Edit 2. billy, todd et al

Old Guns. Edit 2. billy, todd et al

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01-04-2013, 02:11 AM

I feel stupid now completely missing the premise of your poem. In my defence, had the title bar been just 'Old Gun' I might have had a chance! I read it as a message to Billy re. an edit and dismissed it!
So to complete my critique, I can now say I consider it to be a fine poem.

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Old Guns. Edit 2. billy, todd et al - by tectak - 01-03-2013, 07:49 PM

RE: Old Guns. Edit 1. billy et al - by serge gurkski - 01-03-2013, 08:35 PM

RE: Old Guns. Edit 1. billy et al - by tectak - 01-03-2013, 09:52 PM

RE: Old Guns. Edit 1. billy et al - by serge gurkski - 01-03-2013, 10:12 PM

RE: Old Guns. Edit 1. billy et al - by Pete Ak - 01-03-2013, 10:32 PM

RE: Old Guns. Edit 1. billy et al - by tectak - 01-04-2013, 12:13 AM

RE: Old Guns. Edit 1. billy et al - by Pete Ak - 01-04-2013, 02:11 AM

RE: Old Guns. Edit 1. billy et al - by tectak - 01-04-2013, 03:28 AM

RE: Old Guns. Edit 1. billy et al - by Todd - 01-04-2013, 06:47 AM

RE: Old Guns. Edit 1. billy et al - by tectak - 01-04-2013, 07:44 AM