Box

[rowens]

It is simple and at the same time subtle. On its own, it doesn't draw much attention. But it does carry a little mystery. Though it seems pretty obvious what kind of box it is, and the message is clear.

It stops being subtle. It's one of those poems that has a title that adds to the interest, like pointing to a void. "Box". And I like that. But it doesn't carry very far.

It seems on the verge of having a deep effect on someone, but then stops short. Though, as I said, it clearly gets its point across