01-03-2013, 10:29 PM
"reeks of enfeebled desire to produce originality"
I love this! no pun.
but to your possible astonishment: Nope. No originality intended.
The line you troubled over is to be corrected according to your comment. You are right. i ll fix thaT:
To the end line spacing. I agree.
thanks for commenting.
cheers
Serge
at tec again: you said terse verse and I really wanna go for it. Someone called me wordy and i thought about it and must yes, confess, it is so.
I try to get terse. (long way to tipperary though).
Content (plot) and style (how to put it)
another lecture on Gurkski poetics.
And I blame it on you that you triggered that. ;-)
How do you define a poet (Greek: a maker) and how poetry?
Tell me why Danse Russe sounds so fine and don't count words.
Not to mention Cummings and D Thomas too.
If my grammar does not fit you I am sad. Can it fix it to your likes?
Have a fine day
cheerio
Serge
I love this! no pun.
but to your possible astonishment: Nope. No originality intended.
The line you troubled over is to be corrected according to your comment. You are right. i ll fix thaT:
To the end line spacing. I agree.
thanks for commenting.
cheers
Serge
at tec again: you said terse verse and I really wanna go for it. Someone called me wordy and i thought about it and must yes, confess, it is so.
I try to get terse. (long way to tipperary though).
Content (plot) and style (how to put it)
another lecture on Gurkski poetics.
And I blame it on you that you triggered that. ;-)
How do you define a poet (Greek: a maker) and how poetry?
Tell me why Danse Russe sounds so fine and don't count words.
Not to mention Cummings and D Thomas too.
If my grammar does not fit you I am sad. Can it fix it to your likes?
Have a fine day
cheerio
Serge