contemplating

[tectak]

Looking into the mirror
I am glad you're in a
happy shape again. Punctuate. For me

Where's the women gone where have abbreviates with difficulty into "Where've" but it beats the grammatical hell out've "where is/has the women gone"
and where the money? Lost last chance here. "Where's"
Do we care, we better not. Do we care? We'd better not. If only for consistency

I should take a stroll outside
even in the rain:

Luck is out



there.

Finally....why the gimmicky end line spacing.? It adds nothing but reeks of enfeebled desire to produce originality. This piece stands on its merit. It is terse-verse and I commend it.
This parting comment may be received badly but I understood it all. Now that IS originality
Best,
tectak