01-03-2013, 10:12 PM
ok. Columbian streets,I got it now. ,) was close anyway.
I always think of Tijuana when i think about that.
On clichés.No, tec, I don't think so.
One can of course use clichés sarcastically.
But, really, I love this text.
So don't bang your head. ,-)
On "inconsequential": I do know what you mean but just was wondering of how good it fits the metaphors.
The double me's are gone.
No need to invoke Paris for that anymore.
They even take pops at police helicopters.
Chuckling. You very well know that this line is a perfectly catchy title for a new poem.
cheers and a fine day to you
Serge
I always think of Tijuana when i think about that.
On clichés.No, tec, I don't think so.
One can of course use clichés sarcastically.
But, really, I love this text.
So don't bang your head. ,-)
On "inconsequential": I do know what you mean but just was wondering of how good it fits the metaphors.
The double me's are gone.
No need to invoke Paris for that anymore.
They even take pops at police helicopters.
Chuckling. You very well know that this line is a perfectly catchy title for a new poem.
cheers and a fine day to you
Serge