Addiction
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I find this exquisite maybe because I know what the poet is talking about.
Yes, one could shorten it.
I am with TomH on the you and me Charlie line.
On the other hand I do love:
Coke me up, baby, then let me down.
Yes!

I must think more about: would legality crush our passion?

hm? Tricky. I tend to say: yes, it would.

fine poem. enjoyed to read. thank you and cheers
serge
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Messages In This Thread
Addiction - by danipecci - 12-29-2012, 02:52 AM
RE: Addiction - by Keith - 12-29-2012, 03:29 AM
RE: Addiction - by danipecci - 12-30-2012, 02:07 AM
RE: Addiction - by billy - 01-03-2013, 05:27 PM
RE: Addiction - by serge gurkski - 01-03-2013, 09:09 PM
RE: Addiction - by Pete Ak - 01-03-2013, 09:56 PM



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