My Haiku
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Thanks for the feedback! =O Do you mind elaborating more on what you mean by the poem not connecting in a cohesive way please?
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My Haiku - by brandontoh - 01-03-2013, 02:00 PM
RE: My Haiku - by cidermaid - 01-03-2013, 05:01 PM
RE: My Haiku - by brandontoh - 01-03-2013, 05:58 PM
RE: My Haiku - by cidermaid - 01-04-2013, 05:37 AM
RE: My Haiku - by billy - 01-04-2013, 10:28 AM



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