01-03-2013, 05:23 PM
I do agree on removing the "well" -- but the parted and apart signed together was more intentional, as I didn't like for a single word to do the job, but rather an antonym.
the "well" also seemed a little juvenile to me
(once you pointed it out)
also the "forgets my direction" just means that love is moving away from me, "forgets" where I am, if I exist
the "well" also seemed a little juvenile to me
(once you pointed it out)
also the "forgets my direction" just means that love is moving away from me, "forgets" where I am, if I exist
I'll be there in a minute.