Do Scrape Away Your Egotism, America!

[brandontoh]

I really like this poem! I like how straightforward it is with your point, and t gives off the impression of a fervour man who really believes in fighting for his cause. My only gripe is that I feel that you use ellipses too much. Also, I'd put the wachowskis in the penultimate line of the second stanza so it links nicely with the salesman in the last stanza.