01-03-2013, 08:09 AM
Welcome newsclippings!
My first reaction after reading this was wow. You trusted the simplicity without overpowering it.
I don't believe you need "well" or "drifted apart" because "parted naturally" covers that and "well" makes the line weak in my opinion.
I really like what you did here, it's clear with strong lines.
My first reaction after reading this was wow. You trusted the simplicity without overpowering it.
I don't believe you need "well" or "drifted apart" because "parted naturally" covers that and "well" makes the line weak in my opinion.
I really like what you did here, it's clear with strong lines.