01-03-2013, 07:55 AM
i'll have a read of it and line everything up from the top later. i need three good meals in me to tackle this one 
i did a un through the haiku and i like the carry on between each one. the end rhymes seem okay in the sestina. i couldn't find august in the luc bat. like i say i'll leave some feedback as to content later 
i did a un through the haiku and i like the carry on between each one. the end rhymes seem okay in the sestina. i couldn't find august in the luc bat. like i say i'll leave some feedback as to content later