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01-03-2013, 04:41 AM

Thanks for reading my poem. =)

First Edit:
Septolet Big Grin

istance

He
Softly whispers:
‘Stop walking, please…’

She
Persists, but
Silently wishes
He’d give chase.

Original:
Septolet Big Grin

istance

He
Silently whispers:
‘Stop walking, please…’

She
Persists, but
Mutely wishes
He’d give chase.

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Distance - by brandontoh - 01-03-2013, 04:41 AM

RE: Distance - by arbil_poieo - 01-03-2013, 07:51 AM

RE: Distance - by brandontoh - 01-03-2013, 09:48 AM

RE: Distance - by arbil_poieo - 01-03-2013, 09:53 AM

RE: Distance - by billy - 01-03-2013, 10:04 AM

RE: Distance - by brandontoh - 01-03-2013, 10:52 AM

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