Butterfly Bridge edit 1. spelling corrections by uncle vert

[aaron]

i would agree with pete it really looks like you've slaved over this piece. Images are crisp the rhymes seem to flow naturally. i get a sense of loss, i feel something deeper than just a bridge being destroyed. however I dont think it lacks drama or even needs to be dramatic to get its point across. I really enjoyed this piece and i have learned from it. I hope to soon be writing things as well crafted as this, maybe.
thanx for the read

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oh um... what do the headphones mean before the title? does that mean you have this recorded for listening somewhere?