Dinner date

[Keith]

This poem has a lot of whimsy, which seems to be a product of the great flow you have and the entire setting. Your work made me feel nostalgic, because it reminded me of peter cottontail for some odd reason. I have nothing to really critique you, but I just had to thank you for the great read! I absolutely loved this poem (and i say that with all sincerity.) Oh and by the way you have me craving "moth ball and mushroom pie," it sounds delightful!

Thanks for your kind comments, Peter Cottontail doesn't sound odd at all to me, you see the place they had lunch in my mind was in an uderground burrow