12-31-2012, 07:27 AM
This poem has a lot of whimsy, which seems to be a product of the great flow you have and the entire setting. Your work made me feel nostalgic, because it reminded me of peter cottontail for some odd reason. I have nothing to really critique you, but I just had to thank you for the great read! I absolutely loved this poem (and i say that with all sincerity.) Oh and by the way you have me craving "moth ball and mushroom pie," it sounds delightful!