a sonnet for you

[tectak]

Not for me ...but
Is poetry a media for old, this line is short by half a beat. "the old," works and avoids the enjambment...which doesn't
crotchety, British men with two degrees? As long as you say "crotch-etty"you are rockin'
Will someone break the punctuation mold?Good line
The void of time controls retirees
as thumbs do twiddle in the Durham flats. like thumbs that twiddle in the Durham flats.Just a suggestion because "as thumbs do twiddle..."is a tad awkward
Grammatic errors nit and picked with care
by lonely men surrounded by their cats, Yes. Good lines
Without changing their brown stained underwear. and never change their brown-stained underwear....,..but it's your sonnet, not mine
Or is it something more than meets the eye?
A language that expresses more than words.
A way to understand the reasons why
a mans condition differs from a bird's Very ,very fine four lines. Excellent work

My questions seem to never have an end.
Where will my soul rest? it all depends. a little infra-dig but if it's street then that's how it rocks, mother fucker
Best,
tectak