12-29-2012, 02:34 AM
Todd and Billy, thank you both for the help and the kind words. I made an edit above, I think it reads better.
Just to let you know what I was trying to do, I was trying to keep a 5 7 5 count in all three stanzas and make it readable.
As they say, first time you cook something, stick to the recipe, after that you change it as you see fit.
Just to let you know what I was trying to do, I was trying to keep a 5 7 5 count in all three stanzas and make it readable.
As they say, first time you cook something, stick to the recipe, after that you change it as you see fit.