Dare I think for myself
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Great edit, I particularly enjoy the contrast in the stanza's and how much you pack into the lines, I also like the question set up by your title, thanks for the read.
Keith

If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
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Dare I think for myself - by Jae Mc Donnell - 12-28-2012, 08:06 AM
RE: Dare I think for myself - by Leanne - 12-28-2012, 11:30 AM
RE: Dare I think for myself - by smakpopy - 12-28-2012, 12:12 PM
RE: Dare I think for myself - by Keith - 12-29-2012, 01:27 AM
RE: Dare I think for myself - by tectak - 12-29-2012, 06:08 AM



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