now the poem grown, i was wondering if it would stand out better with two stanza,
giggling grins as wide as verity..... end of 1st
Along the path, ....start of 2nd.
also wondered if
Children playing;
pirates ride my feet.
Their arms enfold my calves,
might read a little better but it's just really a nit. nice edit
giggling grins as wide as verity..... end of 1st
Along the path, ....start of 2nd.
also wondered if
Children playing;
pirates ride my feet.
Their arms enfold my calves,
might read a little better but it's just really a nit. nice edit