12-28-2012, 11:42 AM
Just to add some more to this. As Billy said in a way, the writter doesn't get a say in what the reader sees. So if you want us to see something you have to put it there
Just to add, I liked this because I am very visual in my mind, and I could fill in the blanks and write the images myself, which I quite enjoyed.
But I should have added, that the poem itself fails to do this.
That is my bad, and I apologise
Also to add, when I first read this I got the impression the writer was older lets say. But now I feel you maybe quite young. I hope my presumption is not offencive.
Here I don't know if you have ever read this poem, but it is one of my favorite (if by rudyard kipling)
Just to add, I liked this because I am very visual in my mind, and I could fill in the blanks and write the images myself, which I quite enjoyed.
But I should have added, that the poem itself fails to do this.
That is my bad, and I apologise
Also to add, when I first read this I got the impression the writer was older lets say. But now I feel you maybe quite young. I hope my presumption is not offencive.
Here I don't know if you have ever read this poem, but it is one of my favorite (if by rudyard kipling)