First ever senryu (hope I've done it right
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Yeah thanks for that both of you. Great help.
It was fun to try, and I think I would try it again, along with my new understanding of the styleBlush
Billy, I think I like the challenge of the 5 7 5 format, so if I go again I think I'll keep it.
As for which of you is more like winter. If it means your both wise, then all is wellSmile (but something tells me it mean you both cold and harsh Tongue
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RE: First ever Haiku (hope I've done it right - by Jae Mc Donnell - 12-28-2012, 08:25 AM



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