First ever senryu (hope I've done it right

First ever senryu (hope I've done it right

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12-28-2012, 06:08 AM

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A wound is poked raw
Until winter wisdom states
Stop poking it prick

Quote:A wound he pokes raw
Until winters wisdom states
Stop poking it prick

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First ever senryu (hope I've done it right - by Jae Mc Donnell - 12-28-2012, 06:08 AM

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