Love's Prey

[Jae Mc Donnell]

Hello and very welcome to the site. I have to say great job. I really enjoyed the read . I love line 1 2 and 3 what a great way to start off. But I do agree about losing L4. Other than that great job and I look forward to more

Be weary of the lover’s love,
And place no trust in its resilience,
For it can only fail your certitude,
Leaving you alone on your deathbed,
Sacrifice your heart to love,
And you've sacrificed yourself,
For loves beheld does not always feel,
While the beholder becomes loves prey,
To be devoured whole,
To forfeit one’s soul,
And ultimately,
Die alone.

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