The Tear

[tectak]

In an effort to provide a useful critique - I find myself incapable of finding anything about this that needs improvement. I literally read this 3 times over and I find myself both jealous and humbled. Apparently, I have a lot to learn. Haha.

Beautiful work, my friend - the final stanza is one of the best things i've ever read.
I have this sudden urge to try writing while throwing back laughable amounts of whiskey shots.

Sorry for not thanking you sooner but The Tear fell off the bottom of the page and out of sight was out of mind. My muse is an alcoholic....me? I am everything in moderation
Best,
tectak