12-27-2012, 06:37 AM
Thanks for the feedback leanne.
I had not worked this one very hard, i was just keen to get something down and see if people thought the general idea worked.
Suitably encouraged i will have a go at fine tuneing this a bit. (Totally agree with the comments made above concerning first stanza...is v weak now I read in light of comments).
Will have a re-look at what i can use for the transition word in S9.
I had not worked this one very hard, i was just keen to get something down and see if people thought the general idea worked.
Suitably encouraged i will have a go at fine tuneing this a bit. (Totally agree with the comments made above concerning first stanza...is v weak now I read in light of comments).
Will have a re-look at what i can use for the transition word in S9.