12-26-2012, 11:22 AM
(12-26-2012, 09:01 AM)Eric shelman Wrote: These are my first attempts at writing metaphysical riddles. I do not appreciate the destructive criticism and over-psycho-analyzitg my poems Billy, and Tectac. Thanks for your comments Pete AK, and destroying my poem.you're reply shows we're doing what we're supposed to be doing, sadly it also shows that you're posting in the wrong part of the forum, and as of yet have not learned the rudiments of honest feedback. that it is one of your 1st attempts was also an observation i made. but that's okay. if you keep with it, at some point you'll come to realize what a good help honest opinions can be. i refused to insult you with lies, you took the time to write it and post it here in serious, the least i could do was show you the decency i try and show others. don't let this open nerve stop you of trying to improve, >
<><>< believe it or not, i see more poetential in you than most. you question the feedback. Please don't dismiss it as someone trying to be nasty,