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The Moon
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12-26-2012, 09:11 AM
The point of putting your poem in Serious are for the members to go line by line with you. They offered constructive criticism to help you improve. If you don't feel comfortable with this type of criticism then post in novice or mild, but don't be discouraged or offended. It's for your benefit so no need to be rude.
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The Moon - by Eric shelman - 12-20-2012, 06:41 AM
RE: The Moon - by billy - 12-20-2012, 09:55 AM
RE: The Moon - by tectak - 12-21-2012, 02:18 AM
RE: The Moon - by tectak - 12-27-2012, 12:24 AM
RE: The Moon - by Pete Ak - 12-21-2012, 09:30 PM
RE: The Moon - by Eric shelman - 12-26-2012, 09:01 AM
RE: The Moon - by billy - 12-26-2012, 11:22 AM
RE: The Moon - by arbil_poieo - 12-26-2012, 09:11 AM
RE: The Moon - by Todd - 12-26-2012, 09:13 AM
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