Butterfly Bridge edit 1. Corrections by uncle vert
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You indeed have a gift. I can offer no criticism for such a wonderful work but only enjoy the craftsmanship employed. There is a nit I offer and that is in the 12th stanza where I'm sure you meant to use "lose" instead of "loose". Thanks.
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RE: Butterfly Bridge - by Keith - 12-24-2012, 10:29 PM
RE: Butterfly Bridge - by tectak - 12-25-2012, 01:18 AM
RE: Butterfly Bridge - by Uncle Vertical - 12-25-2012, 07:41 AM
RE: Butterfly Bridge - by tectak - 12-25-2012, 05:17 PM



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