Walking Towards Echoes
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kk is a bit late in coming but i kinda been busy...writting letters to all the nawty kids telling em why santa aint gonna visit Big Grin

Within a cavernous void inside me
I heard a voice that cried a name
It's clarity lost in echoes
Boucing off my walls of shame

My loneliness it drove me
A pilgrimmage to find the one
To seek in whose arms I'd fit
That name to whom I belong

No chart or compass for guidance
Ambling lost in many a winding lane
So varied footpath choices
Destinations all the same

Stumbling in confusion
One name I'd never find
Like the messiah in the desert
Wondering without a hopeful sign

Weariness took me over
Sheltering at a roadside inn
The landlord with arms open
Took me with all my sin

Cleansed and refreshed he made me
Alas his name it wasn't the one
I set upon the road again
But now I smile at a memory

As I keep on moving


is still a long way from being even nearly finished but am hoping its going in the right direction..for meself i really dislike the first line..pfft
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Walking Towards Echoes - by TwistedAngel - 12-13-2012, 03:38 AM
RE: Walking Towards Echoes - by benthejack - 12-13-2012, 07:19 AM
RE: Walking Towards Echoes - by Philatone - 12-13-2012, 02:21 PM
RE: Walking Towards Echoes - by tectak - 12-13-2012, 10:27 PM
RE: Walking Towards Echoes - by TwistedAngel - 12-14-2012, 03:02 AM
RE: Walking Towards Echoes - by tectak - 12-15-2012, 07:18 AM
RE: Walking Towards Echoes - by rowens - 12-14-2012, 03:46 AM
RE: Walking Towards Echoes - by xx81510xx - 12-14-2012, 09:58 AM
RE: Walking Towards Echoes - by TwistedAngel - 12-24-2012, 07:36 PM



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