12-23-2012, 03:16 PM
The following is the second half that i have already written but am not happy with would you be able to look it over help me with your in put:
That kiss should have been the last.
Fleeting.
Helping prevent innocence from dissipating,
diserting dying.
Days go by you lose the flicker in your eye,
palms no longer sweaty but dry.
Out of site out of mind.
To all even friendship we say goodbye,
from me to you.
That kiss should have been the last.
Fleeting.
Helping prevent innocence from dissipating,
diserting dying.
Days go by you lose the flicker in your eye,
palms no longer sweaty but dry.
Out of site out of mind.
To all even friendship we say goodbye,
from me to you.