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"Of Dead Wings & Hungry Wind"
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12-22-2012, 07:31 PM
I enjoyed lots of parts but the lack of integration made it difficult for me to maintain the same level of concentration throughout. Evocative lines such as "already apologetic horizon", "carefree direction of the breeze" and "empty promises of sanctuary" seem lost in the narrative. Lots of potential tho.
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"Of Dead Wings & Hungry Wind" - by rEVOLVEr - 12-21-2012, 04:05 AM
RE: "Of Dead Wings & Hungry Wind" - by rEVOLVEr - 12-21-2012, 07:05 AM
RE: "Of Dead Wings & Hungry Wind" - by Leanne - 12-21-2012, 07:40 AM
RE: "Of Dead Wings & Hungry Wind" - by rEVOLVEr - 12-21-2012, 08:03 AM
RE: "Of Dead Wings & Hungry Wind" - by Leanne - 12-21-2012, 08:07 AM
RE: "Of Dead Wings & Hungry Wind" - by billy - 12-21-2012, 08:58 AM
RE: "Of Dead Wings & Hungry Wind" - by Stormageddon - 12-22-2012, 04:19 PM
RE: "Of Dead Wings & Hungry Wind" - by Pete Ak - 12-22-2012, 07:31 PM
RE: "Of Dead Wings & Hungry Wind" - by tectak - 12-22-2012, 07:33 PM
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