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The Promise

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12-22-2012, 06:12 PM

(12-21-2012, 12:05 PM)ellz483 Wrote: Please give me your opinions on the new version!

I need the original to recall the details but from what I do remember it feels improved. Still some work required on evening out the metre so that the rhythm is consistent.

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The Promise - by ellz483 - 12-17-2012, 04:55 PM

RE: The Promise - by billy - 12-17-2012, 05:30 PM

RE: The Promise - by Leanne - 12-17-2012, 05:41 PM

RE: The Promise - by ellz483 - 12-17-2012, 10:54 PM

RE: The Promise - by Pete Ak - 12-21-2012, 04:31 AM

RE: The Promise - by ellz483 - 12-21-2012, 12:05 PM

RE: The Promise - by Pete Ak - 12-22-2012, 06:12 PM

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