Two Things Made Her Smile.

[billy]

Nana creaked her way around,
memoried eyes brimming ancient. this line carries a lot of weight, excellent
Two things made her smile:
Love of God and breathing.
Tales tippy-tapped from her
butterscotch-syrup lips.
I buried my nose into her folds
and smelled eternity.
She taught me to see
where the world’s texture
is so very, very thin;
That I must take care
not to rip it
and let emptiness in.

i'm sure i already left feedback on it i'm presuming it was on another board coause i see memoried. if i had a nit it would be to ask if the last line is needed? but it really would be a niggly thing of a nit.
i think yu nailed it on the edit. well done.