12-22-2012, 04:22 AM
In an effort to provide a useful critique - I find myself incapable of finding anything about this that needs improvement. I literally read this 3 times over and I find myself both jealous and humbled. Apparently, I have a lot to learn. Haha.
Beautiful work, my friend - the final stanza is one of the best things i've ever read.
I have this sudden urge to try writing while throwing back laughable amounts of whiskey shots.
Beautiful work, my friend - the final stanza is one of the best things i've ever read.
I have this sudden urge to try writing while throwing back laughable amounts of whiskey shots.