12-21-2012, 08:34 AM
i thought of saying, "you can do better than this" but the thought of receiving a similar poem a day through my email for the next year dissuaded me 
in truth there is a poem in there. it just needs to be stripped down to the bare bones and fleshed out with some images.
thanks for taking my feedback the way you did.
in truth there is a poem in there. it just needs to be stripped down to the bare bones and fleshed out with some images. thanks for taking my feedback the way you did.