12-19-2012, 08:03 PM
for me it's one of those poems that are hard to give feedback on. it reminds me or beercan sanwich. i like the west indies jameercan feel of it. out of all the poem if i had to pick 1 thing that didn't cut the cheese, it would be whirley twirley
how about whirleh twirleh or some way tthat inparts dialect '
other than that, it me friend like park bench
how about whirleh twirleh or some way tthat inparts dialect '
other than that, it me friend like park bench