12-19-2012, 06:38 AM
Funny and short as it is, this feels like a poem which would do well in the actual critique sections. It's humour is bitter and moralistic, and in its free verse way it's beautifully arranged. Thank you for the read
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe

