Crayons

Crayons

Keith

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12-19-2012, 05:42 AM

(12-19-2012, 05:38 AM)benthejack Wrote: Hey I love the new 2nd stanza! Its fantastic
(although did you mean quiet instead of quite?)

Dow, them I's and E's have me on my knees thanks for the crit. TOMH

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Crayons - by Keith - 12-04-2012, 06:52 PM

RE: Crayons - by benthejack - 12-04-2012, 07:42 PM

RE: Crayons - by Keith - 12-05-2012, 07:28 AM

RE: Crayons - by arbil_poieo - 12-05-2012, 01:19 AM

RE: Crayons - by billy - 12-05-2012, 10:26 AM

RE: Crayons - by davidbenjamindix - 12-19-2012, 12:44 AM

RE: Crayons - by benthejack - 12-19-2012, 05:38 AM

RE: Crayons - by Keith - 12-19-2012, 05:42 AM

RE: Crayons - by lavashine - 01-29-2013, 01:40 PM

RE: Crayons - by Keith - 01-30-2013, 04:54 AM

RE: Crayons - by brandontoh - 01-29-2013, 03:39 PM

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