12-19-2012, 01:08 AM
Wow! Good work. It makes me think at the end they were confused by truth. This refers me to Ephesians 6:10-17, where everything I am given by God is used for defense. The only offensive weapon He gives me is the sword of the Spirit, the Word of God. That's why they couldn't feel the Holy Spirit, because they were acting on their own account, rather than understanding God's will for them. These are just my thoughts, and I'm quite new to poetry. So if my comments are rubbish, I wouldn't be offended if told so.