12-18-2012, 10:41 AM
Hey Billy, I read through this and I have to say I found it very effective.
One question I would like to ask is, the line that says "mammy drinks lots of water", is that about the hangover? Because when I read it I thought it was the child seeing mammy drinking lots of vodka or something clear like that and thinking it was water. Either way it's a good image. Great job.
One question I would like to ask is, the line that says "mammy drinks lots of water", is that about the hangover? Because when I read it I thought it was the child seeing mammy drinking lots of vodka or something clear like that and thinking it was water. Either way it's a good image. Great job.