Temple

Temple

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#10

12-17-2012, 07:45 AM

No problem, if I like the poem giving the feedback is fun to do.

I could move it for you if you like. It's likely something you'll need to sit on for a few weeks to see how your changes hold up. If you do want more detailed discussion that's the forum to be in. Is there an area you're concerned about, or do you just want more detail?

The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson

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Temple - by monablackbird - 12-15-2012, 01:00 AM

RE: Untitled (so far) - bit of language and mature imagery - by Todd - 12-15-2012, 01:51 AM

RE: Untitled (so far) - bit of language and mature imagery - by monablackbird - 12-15-2012, 02:30 AM

RE: Untitled (so far) - bit of language and mature imagery - by Todd - 12-15-2012, 03:29 AM

RE: Untitled (so far) - bit of language and mature imagery - by billy - 12-15-2012, 07:32 AM

RE: Untitled (so far) - bit of language and mature imagery - by Keith - 12-15-2012, 08:11 AM

RE: Untitled (so far) - bit of language and mature imagery - by monablackbird - 12-17-2012, 01:19 AM

RE: Untitled (so far) - bit of language and mature imagery - by Todd - 12-17-2012, 01:27 AM

RE: Untitled (so far) - bit of language and mature imagery - by monablackbird - 12-17-2012, 01:30 AM

RE: Untitled (so far) - bit of language and mature imagery - by Todd - 12-17-2012, 07:45 AM

RE: Untitled (so far) - bit of language and mature imagery - by billy - 12-17-2012, 09:45 AM

RE: Untitled (so far) - bit of language and mature imagery - by monablackbird - 12-21-2012, 06:11 AM

RE: Untitled (so far) - bit of language and mature imagery - by billy - 12-21-2012, 09:29 AM

RE: Temple - by monablackbird - 01-17-2013, 08:41 AM

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