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12-17-2012, 01:30 AM

(12-17-2012, 01:27 AM)Todd Wrote: Looks like you had a tablet substitute a word on you:

Like should be light in the final line

Love the rewrite.

Whoops. Thanks for catching that Todd. And thank you for all of your valuable input. Smile

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Quick question: If I want to continue polishing this at all should I move it into the serious critique forum?

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Temple - by monablackbird - 12-15-2012, 01:00 AM

RE: Untitled (so far) - bit of language and mature imagery - by Todd - 12-15-2012, 01:51 AM

RE: Untitled (so far) - bit of language and mature imagery - by monablackbird - 12-15-2012, 02:30 AM

RE: Untitled (so far) - bit of language and mature imagery - by Todd - 12-15-2012, 03:29 AM

RE: Untitled (so far) - bit of language and mature imagery - by billy - 12-15-2012, 07:32 AM

RE: Untitled (so far) - bit of language and mature imagery - by Keith - 12-15-2012, 08:11 AM

RE: Untitled (so far) - bit of language and mature imagery - by monablackbird - 12-17-2012, 01:19 AM

RE: Untitled (so far) - bit of language and mature imagery - by Todd - 12-17-2012, 01:27 AM

RE: Untitled (so far) - bit of language and mature imagery - by monablackbird - 12-17-2012, 01:30 AM

RE: Untitled (so far) - bit of language and mature imagery - by Todd - 12-17-2012, 07:45 AM

RE: Untitled (so far) - bit of language and mature imagery - by billy - 12-17-2012, 09:45 AM

RE: Untitled (so far) - bit of language and mature imagery - by monablackbird - 12-21-2012, 06:11 AM

RE: Untitled (so far) - bit of language and mature imagery - by billy - 12-21-2012, 09:29 AM

RE: Temple - by monablackbird - 01-17-2013, 08:41 AM

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