Temple
#8
Looks like you had a tablet substitute a word on you:

Like should be light in the final line

Love the rewrite.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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Temple - by monablackbird - 12-15-2012, 01:00 AM
RE: Untitled (so far) - bit of language and mature imagery - by Todd - 12-17-2012, 01:27 AM
RE: Temple - by monablackbird - 01-17-2013, 08:41 AM



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