The onset of winter
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I reallllly love the last line. i mean the one that says And the world watched on in silence to the death of a flower. it really brings everything together for me and you shouldnt change that thank you for this awesome poem.
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The onset of winter - by Jae Mc Donnell - 12-13-2012, 01:19 PM
RE: The onset of winter - by Philatone - 12-13-2012, 02:06 PM
RE: The onset of winter - by Jae Mc Donnell - 12-14-2012, 01:07 AM
RE: The onset of winter - by billy - 12-14-2012, 04:44 PM
RE: The onset of winter - by Jae Mc Donnell - 12-14-2012, 10:25 PM
RE: The onset of winter - by aaron - 12-15-2012, 09:57 PM
RE: The onset of winter - by Todd - 12-15-2012, 11:56 PM
RE: The onset of winter - by cidermaid - 12-16-2012, 06:19 PM
RE: The onset of winter - by Jae Mc Donnell - 12-17-2012, 10:21 AM
RE: The onset of winter - by Todd - 12-17-2012, 10:40 AM



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