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12-15-2012, 08:11 AM

I'm loving this and quite excited to see the edit, just a point that could be relevant when I read it through a few times I felt like it ended at "rain" youve already picked this out so my comment is one that supports your, two Poem idea. Title, how about "Altar Indulgences" Big Grin

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Temple - by monablackbird - 12-15-2012, 01:00 AM

RE: Untitled (so far) - bit of language and mature imagery - by Todd - 12-15-2012, 01:51 AM

RE: Untitled (so far) - bit of language and mature imagery - by monablackbird - 12-15-2012, 02:30 AM

RE: Untitled (so far) - bit of language and mature imagery - by Todd - 12-15-2012, 03:29 AM

RE: Untitled (so far) - bit of language and mature imagery - by billy - 12-15-2012, 07:32 AM

RE: Untitled (so far) - bit of language and mature imagery - by Keith - 12-15-2012, 08:11 AM

RE: Untitled (so far) - bit of language and mature imagery - by monablackbird - 12-17-2012, 01:19 AM

RE: Untitled (so far) - bit of language and mature imagery - by Todd - 12-17-2012, 01:27 AM

RE: Untitled (so far) - bit of language and mature imagery - by monablackbird - 12-17-2012, 01:30 AM

RE: Untitled (so far) - bit of language and mature imagery - by Todd - 12-17-2012, 07:45 AM

RE: Untitled (so far) - bit of language and mature imagery - by billy - 12-17-2012, 09:45 AM

RE: Untitled (so far) - bit of language and mature imagery - by monablackbird - 12-21-2012, 06:11 AM

RE: Untitled (so far) - bit of language and mature imagery - by billy - 12-21-2012, 09:29 AM

RE: Temple - by monablackbird - 01-17-2013, 08:41 AM

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