Walking Towards Echoes

[rowens]

The emptyness inside me
Wos calling out your name
Clarity lost in echoes
Boucing off my walls of shame

Loneliness it drove me
Grail quest to find the one
To find in who's arms I'd fit
That name to whom I belong

In turmoil I became blinded
Ambling down many winding lanes
Ample footpath choices
Destinations all the same

In confusion I wos broken
One name I'd never find
Souls so tattered an well worn
Meandering until the end of time

Tiredness took me over
So rested by an inn
There you stood with arms open
An took me with all my sin

Cleansed an refreshed you made me
I'd been searching for so long
Alas your name it wasn't the one
But now I smile, as I keep on moving on

The better your spelling gets, the more out of place your "wos" and "an" appear. You write some words the way you pronounce them, and write others the way you see them written. But I've never heard you speak, so I'm not sure if that's so. "Emptyness" slips by with your "wos". The only real mistake I see is "who's" in place of "whose".
I think if you try to break out of the sing-song rhyming rhythm, and try many other words and ideas instead, it might open new paths to new understandings, and make a better poem.