The War Cabinet
#10
(12-14-2012, 03:14 AM)trouble Wrote:  hi keith, (hehe)
loved this poem, fantastic imagery.
thank you, it brightened my day Smile
i agree with billy deff a keeper Smile

trouble
hello trouble, thank you for the kind commentsSmile

(12-13-2012, 08:27 AM)Todd Wrote:  That was awesome.

Gin...haha

you taste like fukin perfume.
get out of my sight before I go blind.

No citron...shit.

That was a great read.
Thanks Todd, I think youve picked out the meat in that line so the slow gin reference can go, after reading it back, today, there are alot of clunky lines in this that need a good trim, but I enjoyed the process of dropping it all in one go (from the heart, well mouth so to speak) maybe I'll check the spelling before post next timeBlush

If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
Reply


Messages In This Thread
The War Cabinet - by Keith - 12-13-2012, 08:15 AM
RE: The War Cabinet - by Leanne - 12-13-2012, 08:23 AM
RE: The War Cabinet - by Todd - 12-13-2012, 08:27 AM
RE: The War Cabinet - by billy - 12-13-2012, 09:09 AM
RE: The War Cabinet - by Keith - 12-13-2012, 09:41 AM
RE: The War Cabinet - by benthejack - 12-13-2012, 09:28 AM
RE: The War Cabinet - by Leanne - 12-13-2012, 09:43 AM
RE: The War Cabinet - by Keith - 12-13-2012, 10:36 AM
RE: The War Cabinet - by billy - 12-13-2012, 12:26 PM
RE: The War Cabinet - by billy - 12-14-2012, 10:48 AM
RE: The War Cabinet - by Keith - 12-15-2012, 07:59 AM
RE: The War Cabinet - by davidbenjamindix - 12-19-2012, 07:12 AM
RE: The War Cabinet - by Keith - 12-19-2012, 11:08 AM
RE: The War Cabinet - by arbil_poieo - 01-07-2013, 10:29 AM
RE: The War Cabinet - by Arriedo - 01-07-2013, 12:02 PM
RE: The War Cabinet - by Keith - 01-09-2013, 09:25 AM
RE: The War Cabinet - by newsclippings - 01-09-2013, 05:46 PM
RE: The War Cabinet - by Keith - 01-10-2013, 08:54 AM



Users browsing this thread: 3 Guest(s)
Do NOT follow this link or you will be banned from the site!