12-14-2012, 03:44 AM
(12-14-2012, 03:14 AM)trouble Wrote: hi keith, (hehe)hello trouble, thank you for the kind comments
loved this poem, fantastic imagery.
thank you, it brightened my day![]()
i agree with billy deff a keeper![]()
trouble

(12-13-2012, 08:27 AM)Todd Wrote: That was awesome.Thanks Todd, I think youve picked out the meat in that line so the slow gin reference can go, after reading it back, today, there are alot of clunky lines in this that need a good trim, but I enjoyed the process of dropping it all in one go (from the heart, well mouth so to speak) maybe I'll check the spelling before post next time
Gin...haha
you taste like fukin perfume.
get out of my sight before I go blind.
No citron...shit.
That was a great read.
If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out

