12-13-2012, 08:45 PM
"The harp of the world" is probably the most awesome way I've seen string theory described. 
I think it's pretty great as is. The only thing that mildly stuck out for me was "a thousand hungry worms"... given the scales you've been dealing with throughout the poem, one thousand actually seems like a deliberate understatement by comparison. Maybe it's just me
I think it's pretty great as is. The only thing that mildly stuck out for me was "a thousand hungry worms"... given the scales you've been dealing with throughout the poem, one thousand actually seems like a deliberate understatement by comparison. Maybe it's just me
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?